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Starting 'read through' with David and Jennifer today
David and Jennifer, my captive "first audience", have agreed to start the Far Arena "read through" this morning. I'll convey any resulting feedback in markup to the first chapter which I'll do and upload. Won't get through a chapter today but they've promised to help out over the summer so should be a regular part of my week henceforth.

Chapters 22 and 23
Would you like to work on the last two chapters while I start at the beginning with the "read through"? Receptive, as always, to alternative division of duties. Also wanting to be sure I have your "mad hacker" passes through the early chapters to work from. You know, during the period where you were cutting and I was flinching? I should go with all the cuts I don't feel prepared to fight for. :-)
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